Score: 9

"Little bit long and repetitive"

submission: Grand Theft Awesome

date: June 13, 2008

For an "Awesome" flash, it's fairly long, and I noticed a few moments where the flash could have ended without giving the feeling of slowing down. Fortunately, you managed to save it with a couple of great lines. Overall, good job.

Score: 9

"Z+ they don't stand a chance."

submission: Zombie Survival Quiz

date: February 22, 2008

Though naturally, I must mention some things that felt wrong to me. Barricading oneself in a school may seem like a good choice, in theory. But most schools nowadays carry very little protection. In most schools all classrooms accompany a very large window protected by a weak metal (practically aluminum) grating. Also, schools are very large and in the time it would take to block off all entrances the first floor would be overrun, costing all escape possibilities.

Score: 3

"A nice attempt"

submission: Devil May Cry M2 *SE*

date: November 13, 2007

Look, it takes time and effort to make a flash. From your comments alone I can tell that you spent about a month working on this, maybe less. Aside from the unfortunate voice acting and ridiculously cliché storyline, the animation was just, well, it's hard to describe. The animation isn't bad but there are severe inconsistencies in both artwork and scene changes. When the scene shifts from one angle to another you can see the black screen in between quite clearly. It's a nice attempt but too little time is being spent on these issues, y'know the little things.